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  • cr3ature_

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    - seriously, bro. update. i love it.
    July 24th, 2012 at 02:26am
  • Shadowwolf23

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    Okay i don't mean to be mean but i don't very much like this story. I do like the point of view changes tho. Just a word of advice. Put more detail in it. It all goes by so fast i don't even know whats happening. You don't have to tho just a suggestion.
    July 20th, 2012 at 12:36pm
  • Haysay

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    I hope this tours not the death of her :(
    January 31st, 2012 at 05:16pm
  • Haysay

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    NOOO not a fight :(
    January 17th, 2012 at 05:08pm
  • Haysay

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    Hey its not too short, its just right ;)
    January 4th, 2012 at 06:21pm
  • Haysay

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    Oh the reception, how will that go ;]
    December 28th, 2011 at 10:20pm
  • Alexandrias Nitemare

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    Love the update aww they had their wedding i cant wait to c how the next chapter turns out
    December 28th, 2011 at 05:53am
  • cityrockerfashion6

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    I love the story. I like how the point of view changes between the two sisters. Give the reader best of both worlds. Keep up the great work and can't wait till the next chapter. :)
    December 12th, 2011 at 03:20am
  • smallxface

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    oooooooooooooooooooo she had sex with Ben ;D hmm I wonder what's gonna happen on tour.... <.<

    >.> haha C: <3
    December 7th, 2011 at 12:29am
  • SoLostInStereo

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    Oooooh, liking where this is going :)
    Keep it up :3
    December 5th, 2011 at 02:40am
  • smallxface

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    FINALLY. a story with Ben <3 haha seems like a great story so far!(:
    December 5th, 2011 at 02:38am
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