January 10th, 2013 at 04:47am
Lovesick - Comments
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The layout is beautiful, I love the banner. It really represents the story.This is beautiful poetry, I love it. You're extremely talented. <3 <3 Recommended!January 10th, 2013 at 04:41am
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So, I was honestly kind of confused at first. I was like "O.o what kind of story is this?" and then I saw it had explained it was a verse story. I like it a lot, actually. I've never read any story like this beacuse it's so unique and very good. It breaks my heart reading this story, and it basically pulling every emotion out of me. I really like this.June 29th, 2012 at 02:01am
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I love the header image. It just goes so well with the whole story and seems to add to it. Your writing style is so different, it took me like forever to adjust to it :p
I really do hope you continue with this story. I feel like its one of those shinning stars and its something that amazingly, Mibba has needed lately. Good luck to the future!June 9th, 2012 at 12:06pm
Anyway, back to my comment.
I love the first chapter with all my heart, and also when you described perfection like that; I can't remember reading a more effective and moving poem in a very. very. VERY long time. I really hope you continue not even just with this but I hope you continue writing in general. You're amazing and I love your style A+++