Light-Year - Comments

Comment #3 for contest:
This is really sweet. :) I liked how you made them have that struggle between actually seeing each other and how hard it would be for a musician to maintain a relationship while being on the road, especially when their significant other is just as busy as they are. That's not something you find in a lot of fanfictions. I'm also a sucker for best friends dating. There's always something so cute and innocent about best friends finally dating after a long time spent together. You captured the experience of a long distance relationship well. :)

I have to say, this is one of the better Logan fanfics I have read. Congrats to you. :) I enjoyed the reality of Logan compared to fictional boy. I felt like you capture his personality quite well and I give you props. For me, I always try to get personas right. And you did an excellent job. The way you write is very good, I'm happy with the layout of the whole story. It was nice, simple, easy to read, and overall cute. This is good, :)

Ahh, this was so sweet, I loved it! Even though it was about being apart from the one you love, it was also about the feeling you get when you know you're going to be with that someone again. I've actually had Skype dates before with guys who lived either a few states away or actually across the world, so I could easily relate to this story :) As usual, beautifully detailed. No typos, as far as I could see. And the layout was perfect for my tastes c: