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  • BrandyHeartss2013

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    I love it, Please keep updating !!!! :D
    May 21st, 2012 at 02:30am
  • ConfidenceIsBeauty

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    Are you planning on updating any time soon? I'm sick of waiting for it! It's just that it's a great story and I would love to read more, but you're not updating it
    March 8th, 2012 at 09:42pm
  • chana300

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    Honestly, I thought that the first 3 to 5 chapters were brilliant. I love that you were able to combined a very sophisticated writing with that the idiotic thoughts teens get. It really make me wanted to read more.

    I feel like you should have focus more into the relationship with her parents because I see a very good story coming out of it and it could have been you unique to see parents that don't how to show their love learn how to show it through their grandchild. It could have been a very touching story.

    I think that you don't know were you going with the story and that's why taking time to write about it; I may be right because I think you going to write about something crazy Rebecca is going to do and then happily ever after or I may be wrong so, I looking forward to reading what is going to happen.

    Good luck and I really love your story :)
    March 8th, 2012 at 05:08am
  • ConfidenceIsBeauty

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    this is amazing. please update!
    February 29th, 2012 at 10:19pm
  • Zombiesloveme

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    I love this! It's brilliant, wonderfully written. Update soon!
    February 29th, 2012 at 12:23am
  • Burgerat20

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    gooood stuff. a sequel sounds awesome
    January 8th, 2012 at 10:04am
  • BrandyHeartss2013

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    YESH.
    I WANT A SEQUEAL
    BUT U KNOW WHAT I WANT MORE?!?!?!
    ANOTHER FRIKEN UPDATE
    COME ON UPDATE UPDATE UP DATE UP DATE UP DATE
    OR ELSE YOUR COMMENT BOX WILL BE FILLED WITH ME BEGGING FOR ANOTHER UPDATE =/
    January 3rd, 2012 at 11:02pm
  • mrs.jonas1234

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    I love this story! and I would definetly be interested in reading a sequel. (:
    January 2nd, 2012 at 10:13pm
  • Vampirelover31

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    im going to punch you.. you better update.. this is getting so fucking good
    December 31st, 2011 at 04:43am
  • mockingrae

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    Yay! Another chapter!!

    More soon! More soon, haha!
    December 30th, 2011 at 09:51pm
  • Burgerat20

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    wooooo!!!!!
    oh my cheese i cant wait to see what happens
    December 30th, 2011 at 08:41pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    Oh crap!
    December 30th, 2011 at 04:41pm
  • Burgerat20

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    IM SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
    im like dancing in my room
    December 30th, 2011 at 12:23am
  • Burgerat20

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    AHHHH!!!!!! she ran into him!
    and i have been slackin on my comments gotta make up for it
    December 30th, 2011 at 12:23am
  • mockingrae

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    How can this not have more comments?

    You're a wonderful writer, and so far, this story is amazing, :).

    Can't wait for the next update!
    December 29th, 2011 at 11:39pm
  • BrandyHeartss2013

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    Please Write More chapters PLEASE this Story is AMAZING and so beautifully written

    It is one of my FAVORITES on mibba <3
    December 29th, 2011 at 07:19pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    I'm excited to read more!!!!
    December 25th, 2011 at 04:14am
  • Burgerat20

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    good stuff
    December 25th, 2011 at 01:03am
  • Burgerat20

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    Awesome sauce!!!
    keep going!!
    December 21st, 2011 at 07:04pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    Great update!!!
    December 21st, 2011 at 01:15pm
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