My Roommate - Comments

mistresseulalie. (100)

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This is soo cute<3 Kinda dirty>.<

December 5th, 2011 at 02:09am

gar-bage (300)

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This is interesting so far. The first chapter, the preface, is good. Short and suite and intriguing. I would like to see more back story in the second chapter, though. I feel like I don't really know the girl who is telling the story.

Other than that, great job so far!

December 5th, 2011 at 12:00am

The Joker's Wife (100)

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Just like her.. V
I read and I read and I read and I read.
I love it!
It started off amazing, preface was ever-so-perfect, and chapter 1? Dear God, I thought I was drowning in amazingness!
Never, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, EVER stop writing. [:

December 4th, 2011 at 11:41pm

which-witch (100)

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Please continue :D

December 4th, 2011 at 11:36pm

RainbowsEnd (100)

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OMG...
I read.
I read.
And I read it over
Over
And over again.
Love it so far. But you're leaving me hanging off a cliff xD

December 4th, 2011 at 11:00pm