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  • warmaiden

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    I am a huge fan of The Lord Of The Rings, but this was a bit confusing at first. As for the spelling, It would be best to properly spell "sexy". Aside that, spelling wasn't a problem.

    The only thing that bugged me was their style of speaking. They all have that old fashion way of speaking and you wrote them speaking in modern times. That was my only problem
    December 30th, 2011 at 11:31pm
  • Dead Puppeteer

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    I know! Don't they! He totally has a man-crush on him. He's so co-dependent on him! I have a Pippin one that I've started on and as soon as I get that one up I'm working on Aragorn's.
    December 25th, 2011 at 04:03am
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    haha I knew it. Merry and Pippin are totally a cute couple. I think that Frodo has a man-crush on Gandolf, definitely.

    I'd love to read one for Aragorn.
    December 25th, 2011 at 03:55am
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