I'm in an Arranged Marriage to Who? - Comments

FrankJScott (100)

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reginsen (100)

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Nice story ;o) Update soon, please! :O)

May 3rd, 2012 at 02:54pm

annie2031 (100)

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love it

March 1st, 2012 at 12:47pm

warmaiden (6085)

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The layout I noticed was a pre-made one. Still cute. I read the first chapter and there were many errors. A lot of the I's were not capitalized and the way you spelled "Ohmigosh" was rather childish. I am a big fan of Ian and The Vampire Diaries, but there were a lot of things that irked me about the chapter.

Maybe if you tried adding humor with realistic and proper spelling, writing, dialogue, it would infact be much better

December 30th, 2011 at 10:28am

MorgieLuvs (100)

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good story.... yeah i think she might be bipolar as well :/
ian sommerhalder = omfg sooooooo hot
:D

xxMorgan

December 6th, 2011 at 06:30am