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  • Momo1990

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    I feel there should have been a little more smut.
    April 2nd, 2020 at 01:07am
  • Rockergirl666

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    I love the story so far and the changing points of view work. I can actually picture everything that goes on
    April 17th, 2013 at 11:59am
  • Hilltop Hi-Jinks

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    This was a brilliant story ^^
    Every up and down was fantastic and I will very happily read anything else you write.
    February 11th, 2013 at 01:59am
  • AliNicTem

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    :( Poor Spencer!
    February 6th, 2013 at 07:01pm
  • bubbles103157

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    I can't believe you killed her.. omg :(
    February 4th, 2013 at 09:44pm
  • ilikewalls

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    ahhhh why dont you just rip my heart out and stomp on it. that was so darn sad, good, but sad.
    February 4th, 2013 at 03:05am
  • Mylastwish

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    DAMN YOU TO HECK! thanks to you I'm bawling my eyes out. What a fantastic story.
    February 4th, 2013 at 02:09am
  • Ivy23

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    I love the stories! But they need to have the parts where the action is, like one minute someone is missing then they find them. What happened in between!?
    January 18th, 2013 at 10:54pm
  • AliNicTem

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    Gahhh! I just found this story and read it all! I could not stop reading. I can't believe she is dead though.....wasn't not expecting that. Great story!
    January 17th, 2013 at 08:25am
  • FarmGirl33

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    Please update! I can't believe someone did that to hurt them. I thought he was going to kill Abby when he said he induced labor!
    January 12th, 2013 at 07:47pm
  • violetkarma

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    That dirty sick scumbag etc. They better find her in time!!! Abby HAS to have a mommy!!!!!!
    January 12th, 2013 at 12:42am
  • violetkarma

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    This is amazing I'm glad i found it!!!!
    January 11th, 2013 at 06:48pm
  • FarmGirl33

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    Love it! Great author; you know the characters so well. Please keep going!
    January 9th, 2013 at 06:14pm
  • Hilltop Hi-Jinks

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    I love this story :D
    You're a great author and I can't wait for more
    December 20th, 2012 at 03:17pm
  • JustThinking

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    Well damn... His vampire fetish went on overload..
    December 5th, 2012 at 05:58pm
  • JustThinking

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    [insert wolf whistle here] Smile
    November 23rd, 2012 at 02:54pm
  • Meriadoc Brandybuck

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    @ Birchly Reid
    Go right ahead! Thanks for asking. <3
    November 5th, 2012 at 04:55am
  • Birchly Reid

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    I love this! Do you mind if I use your description of how Spencer smells? I thought it was brilliant :D
    November 5th, 2012 at 12:28am
  • JustThinking

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    Eh.. Claim your editing right as a Fanfiction writer. Just throwing it out there. Good chapter. Smile
    November 4th, 2012 at 09:52pm
  • JustThinking

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    Aww!<3
    October 26th, 2012 at 09:56am
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