I thought I was going to overload on dramatic phrases. Haha, I may possibly be guilty of the cliche similes but, gosh. This story was epic. This part right here: There goes Mr. Johnson's deli. I think he was inside too. That's not good. Oh well. I never liked Mr. Johnson anyway. I bet he was vaporized. Epicness. The beginning was so over the top and then to add in the aliens part, was awesome. I also loved how Steve suddenly had superpowers and knocked out aliens with one punch. The overly dramatic ending was a nice way to tie it all off. Best story ever.
August 17th, 2012 at 04:27am