The Art of Being Invisible - Comments

This is fantastic :) wonderful 2nd person, keeping it mysterious and lovely.

i just reread this - yes, i seem to be rereading a lot of yours at the moment :) - and its still just so good!!

i love the way you write, your stories always flow so well :)
and i like that this was in the second person, not many writers can pull it off but you really did. i really liked this story, and how mysterious Danny was right up until then end. great job! :)