365 Days. - Comments

I know it's no help to your question but however you decide to write the story will satisfy me :D
But Chase sure is getting comfy at Evie's house, in Evie's room, with Evie ... ;)

Awww.... Chase is there every day :3 I hope you make yourself nice and cozy in that house Chase becauses I bet Evie enjoys your presence! If you wanted to split the book up its your choice but I think once they see how the chapters are like they won't mind as much because of the formatting but I dunno. I'm not very much help but if you do split it up maybe have each story be like 100 chapters or something. Once again I'd like to point out I'm not good with ideas x)

Aw. Looks like Chase is changing. And I hope Evie is better...for now at least.

I really hope that this ends up a happy story and not a tear-jerker... I think it would be better like to make a chapter every 100 like start a new one at 300 and then 200 . It seem less complicated . Can't wait for the next chapter.

I think the collection would be a bit confusing or idk. I was looking forward to a single story having 365 chapters LOL.
Aww, Chase you sweetheart. Never leave ever <3

When I first got this in the comment swap feature, I was a little hesitant about reading this because of the amount of chapters, I'll be honest. But luckily, I started reading it, and well, I couldn't stop. I kind of like the formatting. It reminds me a lot of Ellen Hopkins' books, which are really great. So I really liked that similarity. I also like the idea of the 365 thing.

Anyway, grammatically I only noticed a few mistakes. Mostly typos. So perhaps just a little proofreading would be beneficially. But I didn't notice it too terribly often. Your story seems to be very unique so I give you a lot of credit for that. I also really like how well you've described Evie. He's a very well developed character. Anyway, keep up the good work!

Oh my god what is Evie sick from?!?!?!

I like the whole 365 idea. Its perfect and I hope there is some form of miracle cure or I think I will actually cry.
I'm so attached to the characters already!
I cannot wait for the next chapter jzsdhskcnsdjckncdjksbnfvdsbncjksdncjkdnfjdfbjhnckd hahaha :D <3

Oh no! Our poor Evie is getting more sick, wahh!

what's happening what kinda disease is this science you're not doing your job omG my poor baby run on sentence is run on.

He's getting worse D:

okay so like what is Evie sick from.....i feel sad........ i dont understand...dont kil little Evie

I think I have come to appreciate Magnus’s presence in this story! I like the way the ninja butler is so concerned for Evie

I just started reading this but omg! It's so good! And so well written and I love it!

Poor Evie is so sick!! :(

Sadface. There should be a miracle or something.

Oh... Evie... I knew that if I read this story I was gonna be sad at some point *sigh*
Can't wait for the next update :)

That's right Chase! You freaking tell him! Show that creep who's boss! XD or not but I'd really like if you did :D
Ahh.... Evie! Loved him flicking paint in their faces and his love of artwork :3 To that I salute you and give you a cookie!

Yeah ! Chase is finally showing Mickel who's boss.

I think Mickel should be mugged, hit by a car, or something like that. Maybe it'll knock some of the creeper out of him ... :P

wtf Mickel buzz off xD omg.