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  • BlueBird.

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    this makes me feel very cynical....im not sure whether thats a good thing or a bad thing
    March 16th, 2008 at 09:19am
  • wabadabadaba

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    still sounds amazing!!
    March 14th, 2008 at 09:04pm
  • Pansy .xo

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    Good job so far.
    I think your story's got some backbone. :P
    March 14th, 2008 at 06:02pm
  • kafka.

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    You asked for a honest review, but really there's not much to say that hasn't been already said.

    As the first comment puts it DUDE WRITE MORE.
    THIS SEEMS INTERESTING :O    . Make your chapters a tiny bit longer, it's an interesting story and a good plot so write more, don't be afraid to put more out there. You're writing telegrams not chapters right now.

    Then it would just be my subjective opinion but if you moved the story to the left and made the font a tiny bit smaller it would look better.
    March 14th, 2008 at 01:38pm
  • tiffanydarlingxo

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    I like this so far :]
    March 14th, 2008 at 01:29pm
  • wabadabadaba

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    this is a cool story!!
    totally subscribing!
    March 14th, 2008 at 12:35pm
  • Pure Sex.

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    This seems like it's going to be really interesting!
    I'm subscribing.
    You're writing is great.
    March 14th, 2008 at 11:40am
  • tyler joseph.

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    This seems really interesting. I'm suscribing. :D
    March 14th, 2008 at 02:30am
  • Pansy .xo

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    I'll read it if you promise it's not a fan-fic. :D It sounds good.
    I'm kinda curious abotu where it's going...
    March 14th, 2008 at 12:54am
  • Siriano;

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    Hmm. Sounds cool.
    March 13th, 2008 at 09:14pm
  • howtrueisthetruth

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    omg i want to read this
    *subscribes*
    yay this is like totally intresting.
    reckon you'll update soon eh?
    pretty please
    <333
    March 13th, 2008 at 01:50pm
  • i should

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    seriously update update update
    March 13th, 2008 at 01:41pm
  • eeeee

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    This could turn out to be a really good story =]
    March 13th, 2008 at 12:08pm
  • Degausser

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    Interesting ideas.
    Write more XD
    March 13th, 2008 at 11:55am
  • x_Vicious_Romantic_x

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    Oooh I really wanna read more!

    *subscribes*

    update soon please =]
    March 13th, 2008 at 11:49am
  • The Marty Parade

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    DUDE WRITE MORE.
    THIS SEEMS INTERESTING :O
    March 13th, 2008 at 11:44am
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