Cold and Broken - Comments

That was sad. And the first, first-point of view I've read. I was half expecting it to have a happy ending. For Draco to tell him to stay and that he'd leave her. I guess I sorta knew though that that wouldn't happen. I mean, stuff like that doesn't happen in real life so why should it in a story? That sounds cryptic, sorry, haha.
I think having this in first-person made it more personal as well. Harder, I guess, when 'I' actually left at the end, if that makes any sense.
You're honestly so talented it nearly baffles me, hah. (:

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THIS IS AMAZING!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!
i normaly dont like fan fics about harry potter and stuff, and most of them go nowhere, but this is so well written and i could see it play out in my head like a movie!!! so amazing!! really amazing work! thank you for such a good read!