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this is so good! i love it

this is so good! i love it

Oh my god this story is really great! Zacky as a shapeshifter was very interesting. Aww I'm so sad that Zacky died at the end :( Really great writing. Keep up the good work! I love your writing so much!

Love it! just like all your one shots! but for some reason, i had a mini vision after i read this. like there should be a sequal where brian takes corra and make her his, but he doesnt know that corra has be turned, then, when there having sex, she kills him. and a prequal after that with corra, a hundread years later or maybe two hundread where zacky is re-encarnaded, zacky remembers everything when he sees her again and shtuffs like that. that was my mini vision after i read it. its your story so im not telling you to do it, cause its yours and yours alone, but i just wanted to tell you that.... so..... I LOVE IT!

Man this oneshot just blew me away!
Corra just being so at ease when she found out about Zacky's secret.
Him being a wolf or shapeshifter and she just accepted him despite how supernatural he is.
Then when he saw in her red underwear, he just lost it.
The smut was just right and toward the end Zacky lost it for a but, biting Corra and drinking from her.
But then sad part was when the hunter Brian came and just interrupted them though it was good thing or else Zacky would have accidently killed Corra.
Though it was sad because both Corra and Zacky got to become but it was short lived when Brian killed Zacky.
This is an amazing oneshot!!!!!
AWESOME JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow!
I am loving this two shot already!
Corra just minding her own business when she goes to her brother and dropping some of the fruits that her mother wanted to give to that grumpy old man.
And she lives next door to Zacky Baker, the rhythm guitarist for one of her favorite bands.
I bet Zacky noticed the way she was looking at him and that probably spurred on him.
Man that must have bee frightening for Corra being watched and then chased by a huge black wolf that green eyes.
If that happened to me I freak out and run away like hell!
Before she blacked she unconsciously let out that wolf was Zacky.
Now I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!