January 18th, 2015 at 07:19pm
@ Checkmate Joy
Oh yeah, definitely haha. My old stories I ended up deleting when I came back because I just didn't want to deal with them xD
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January 18th, 2015 at 07:10pm
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@ Sammy-Poo!
Ah yeah, thank you! I know there are a lot of things wrong with these stories because I didn't understand grammar and etc. It's surprising how much one can chabge after 2-3 years.January 18th, 2015 at 07:05pm -
It's not bad! But I would suggest putting spaces between your paragraphs, it would make it easier to read. And there is some errors, like after you put three dots "..." there's supposed to be a space after before starting a new word, and after dialogue the word is actually supposed to be lowercase. Like "..." she said. But it definitely has potential, I think you just need to re-read it and maybe edit it a little and space out your paragraphs (:January 18th, 2015 at 06:52pm
Ah I see. I'm keeling mine because I'm a sentimental person and want my old stories to remain and show progression in addition to history.