Wonderfully Wandering Alone - Comments

This is really good.

This is really good.

This whole story is beautifully written, well thought out, and amazing. Not to mention that Ver's personality sounds like mine. O.o I got a bit freaked when you said her favorite PATD song was Northern Downpour. lol Can't wait for the next chapter!(:

UPDATE!!

This successfully got me back into P!@TD fanfics :D
Keep writing! :) x

Can't wait to see what happens when they find out she's gone!

Ahh i still love this story! Don't start a sequel just yet. Hmmm i think William did something to Bren and Ryan to make them act so shitty...

I love the new update! i think it would be cool if Ver became both a vampire and a fallen angel! I hope Brendon and Ryan save her from William! Update soon!

I just read this story for the first time. I think I might be in love with it. Normally, I can't stand it when all the boys in a story fall in love with the girl, but for some reason, it works in this story.
It's been so long since I've read a vampire story with Pete Wentz, Brendon Urie, Ryan Ross, etc. I'm pretty sure this is the first time I've read one that's actually good. :) In the ones that I've read before, Pete is the good guy and William and his crew are the bad guys, so I like how it's different in this story. Even though William is still kind of the bad guy in this story, but you know what I mean I'm sure.
Anyway, this is awesome. Update soon pleeeeasee.

Ooooo i like this chapter. Intense. Keep it up!

I think William is planning something with Ver. I am really hapy she chose both Brendon and Ryan! Update soon!

you're*

you're*

really? you'r REALLY gonna end it right there?? hahaa but seriously you gotta write more soon!!!

I just found this and I gotta say I'm digging it! I'm super happy she ended with both although I'm getting a feeling she's gonna settle with only one later on but that's just my guess

I just read the first chapter. I'm a huge fan, or used to be, of P!ATD. I still listen to them occasionally. I'm really happy I read this. I love the band, I love vampires to death, and this story isn't half bad. However, I'm a little confused. This chapter seems a little out there. I'm thinking it may be a dream. Still, I think you should keep writing this. :)

I really want her to choose Brendon! I like Ryan too! If it were me, i'd choose both of them! I love this story! Update soon!

!!!!!UPDATE SOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!

So I'm not a fan of P!ATD or Vampires (any more) but I still found this interesting. You started off well but I found at times you seemed to... lack I guess I can say in depictions and such. It felt like you tried to rush some parts. Don't get me wrong, the story is definitely interesting and you're doing a very good job with it :)

update please!!! x)