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  • A walking travesty.

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    You’re an amazing author and I truly hope you continue this story or at least start more because your writing is more enthralling than a lot of published books I’ve read in a long time. xx
    June 13th, 2020 at 03:33pm
  • Nanook

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    Ugh, so I just reread this again to torture myself, I guess, since it was never finished. XD But I seriously loved it so much so I wanted to read it again. Idk, is that weird?
    I've been struggling to find a good story such as this one, also why I reread it. I would seriously love you if you thought about finishing it. I think it deserves an ending.
    But I'm basically leaving you another comment to just let you know what an awesome writer I think you are. You're seriously so good at getting the details and not leaving anything out, I love your writing. Wish more people wrote like this.
    But yeah, idk if you'll see this but I just wanted to leave feedback once again. Such a great story that I hope one day is continued or finished.
    December 18th, 2016 at 07:05am
  • Nanook

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    Ugh, this story is soooo good. I really love it. I'm sad you never finished it. :(
    It's been two years since you last updated it, but I just wanted to let you know if you ever choose to continue, I will be here to read it. Seriously really good. One of the better stories I've read on Mibba lately.
    It is so cute with the love story, and I just... really hope you haven't given up on it.
    You're an amazing writer.
    <3
    September 20th, 2015 at 08:15pm
  • AllTimeTaylor

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    Aw please update this soon its such a good story!
    November 26th, 2013 at 08:01pm
  • missbeckylouise

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    Aw that was such a cute first date (apart from the Dominic part), it was a really good update like always!
    July 5th, 2013 at 07:56am
  • missbeckylouise

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    ahh I love this so much, they are just perfect for each other! I hope she does talk to her mum about it and everything gets sorted out, and I'm sure the baby wouldn't replace Emma so Val doesn't need to worry! Thank you for the brilliant update as always!
    June 7th, 2013 at 08:25am
  • missbeckylouise

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    OH the drama! but yeah, this just keeps getting better, I love it! I was hoping for an update soon so yay!
    May 23rd, 2013 at 10:20pm
  • AllTimeTaylor

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    Please.please please update!
    May 19th, 2013 at 10:26pm
  • missbeckylouise

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    they are so perfect together! just out of interest, is there going to be any more drama? (please say no, they're too adorable to fight) yeah, I love this so much!
    April 23rd, 2013 at 05:45pm
  • fifi42069swagblazeit

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    AW THEY'RE SO PERFECT
    April 23rd, 2013 at 01:50pm
  • missbeckylouise

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    aw this is just so cute, I could read it forever. I'm so glad everyone's happy with them being together because they're adorable! Thank you for such amazing chapters :)
    March 18th, 2013 at 05:43pm
  • erratic

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    Alex making breakfast sounds absolutely adorable. Trix noticing his lack of pants was icing on the cake ;)

    As usual, this was a lovely chapter and I'm more than happy that you posted it.
    March 18th, 2013 at 05:25pm
  • sassy94

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    theyre so perfect together :3
    March 18th, 2013 at 10:26am
  • fifi42069swagblazeit

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    Okay, so, this fic isn't finished... right? Because wow, I really love it.
    March 16th, 2013 at 08:16pm
  • confidentcoward

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    This just keeps getting better and better, oh my.
    I just read you recent updates, because I was behind...shame on me, and oh gosh I was squealing like a little pig!!
    March 13th, 2013 at 05:18am
  • confidentcoward

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    This just keeps getting better and better, oh my.
    I just read you recent updates, because I was behind...shame on me, and oh gosh I was squealing like a little pig!!
    March 13th, 2013 at 05:18am
  • JPARADOWSKI16

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    Just read the first chapter and I freaked when you said five-by-five I HOPE THAT WAS A BUFFY REFERENCE!
    March 12th, 2013 at 11:25am
  • GarageBandKing

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    Sosososososo good! Can not wait for the next update!
    March 11th, 2013 at 10:31pm
  • missbeckylouise

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    aw I'm so glad they're together! Dominic's a twat and I do kind of feel sorry for Lisa but yeah, I'm definitely happy they're FINALLY together :D
    March 11th, 2013 at 08:20am
  • GarageBandKing

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    I think the chapter is the most well written of then all! Amazed. Can't wait for the next update :)
    March 4th, 2013 at 08:27am