Unraveling - Comments

So you updated on quizilla and not here?

Update, or I'll cry.

Please update. I'm obsessed!

updateeeeeeee

Hurry up and update <3 <3<3...please

Cant say it enough how much I love tyler lol

Ooooh so good :D

Btw whoever you lost breakup wise lost an amazing person, talent wise at least considering I don't really know you lol. But still :)

Why isn't Tyler letting her talk about if? And why bentley?!?!?!?!,

BENTLEY'S BACK
OH MY GOD
ASLDKFJHALSDKJCVHASKLDJFHLSJK SHIT
god damn.
I thought they were gonna go at it again! :c
PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

Ahh./: I'm sorry about your breakup. I know the feeling.
I'm glad everything's better now though(:
Can't wait for the next update.

So sorry about the break up but love the chapter. I see his side of not telling but I also see her's, she likes him and she wants to tell the world. Cant wait for the next chapter ; )

I'm so sorry to hear about your breakup! Things will get better, but for now: ice cream and cookie dough!

And thank you so much for the update. If it helps, it made my day.

:)

Hang in there champ.

AHHHHHH!!!!!
keep going!

Eek :D I wait for these updates all the time! And they're always worth the wait :)))

Ahh! I love Tyler so much!!!(:
I hate that Avery has to lie to her grandmother though.
Oh, and you accidentally posted that chapter twice.

they are so ADORABLE together! :D Love it!

You don't understand how much I love the series. No one can really write anything about heroes & incorporate a love story into to make it as good as Batman or Spiderman or Superman. I'm serious, your writing is AMAZING

Good thing Avery came up with that lil' lie. ^^; Wonder what Tyler has up his sleeve this time....

Btw, I think Chapter 7 and 8 are the same.

LOVED IT <3__<3

AHHHHHHHH
they did it!
thoose chapters were awesome
!!!!! keep goin!

I love you
I love Tyler
hehehe so much lovin goin on. ;)