Its sorta odd to read Jimmy as the one in control in one of your ficcy's though. It's usually Matt. Ahh well though, its not a bad thing... just something different.
I like how they all have no time to find girls and Jimmy and Zack are the only two who have made any progress at all. They're just kinda like 'yeah yeah, we'll get to it'... and just keep putting it off.
Also... evil Nikki Sixx... awful sexy, even if he is the baddie. Then again, he's awful sexy regardless.
But yeah... I can't wait for the next installation so hurry and write it, yeah?