this was quite a good update, and i'm glad to see that you updated it, and i translated the terms and need to remember what they are for future reference BUT GOODNESS RYAN DON'T IGNORE YOUR FEELINGS THEY'RE OKAY TO HAVE. (also i'm going to pretend that P&P stands for PeteandPatrick because you love me that much shhh)
so fucking sorry i haven't commented since the first chapter. i haven't been getting the notifications you updated, idk why then i just randomly thought of this story and had an oh fuck! moment and read it i really love the fact one chapter of your story is equal to about 10 of other people's it really does show the amount of effort you put into your work plus, the description and details are just amazing! mindfuck i also love how promiscuous Brendon is in this one, fucking hot. but i WILL be commenting from now on, whether or not mibba decided to notify me i love this, and everything else you write update soon c:
NO BRENDON! It's okay nothing bad will happen Ryan will take care of you and then you'll get married!...if you can't tell, I think I'm getting a wee to emotionally attached to this story.
I knew this was gonna kick ass! Who was right!? *raises hand* THOUGHT SO. haha I really do like this story. It's the one Ryden that's actually good! You're my new favorite author *for Rydens* on this shitty site<3 (jk Mibba, I love you.)
I keep going from hating Brendon and wanting to kill him out of annoyence to loving him and wanting to hold him and keep him from ever being sad again. An I can't wait for the next part
Brendon's attitude in this is amazing! He is really sarcastic. It seems Ryan is losing his patience already lol. And that part about the naked for body heat...I love Brendon's comments aha!