I can honestly say this is one of my favorites here on Mibba. I loved your writing style and the entire approach you had with this. It's a completely different plot line - very original - and you incorporated Christmas to perfection! And the layout is beautiful as well! The picture you used at the top is perfect for this story! The last paragraph of the last chapter was my favorite - how he was hit with realization and then he heard her whisper. This was an amazing short story! :)
And the layout is beautiful as well! The picture you used at the top is perfect for this story!
The last paragraph of the last chapter was my favorite - how he was hit with realization and then he heard her whisper.
This was an amazing short story! :)