Miserable at Best - Comments

This was hella hot! Dang, you don't see much Zacky smut floating around these days which is sad cause he's my favorite- but you do an amazing job! Just like with everything you write, it will always be wonderful! I loved how she was trashing all of his shit- finally a better reaction than just breaking down and crying after you break up with someone. Makes me feel empowered! But before I get side tracked, wonderful story- I'm gonna go read all of your stuff now!

It was very good I loved that she started destroying all of his stuff specially his car. Love a women in control. :) The part that she brings Zack home and Mitchel is still there was my favorite... awesome story..

Well, that was just an excellent short story, wasn't it?

I must say, I loved that she got mad and destroyed Mitchell's shit. Most stories involving a character finding their partner cheating usually ends up with the person getting emotional and just breaking down. But Tess just got angry and she displayed it very well... especially when she took to his car with a baseball bat. That had to hurt him. Hahaha.

Her decision to go the bar was a good one. Everyone needs to drown their sorrows once in a while and she damn well had a good reason to this time. I can't believe her best friend did that to her, too. I hope that she gives to her what she gave to Mitchell... because some might say she betrayed Tess even greater than Mitchell did.

Zack is sweet. I liked how he stayed relatively sober and took care of her, even though she was a complete stranger. And he handled himself well when they got back to her house and ran into Mitchell... though he did have the upper hand and probably enjoyed helping Tess rub it in that douche's face.

I have to admit, you caught me by surprise with the twist at the end that Zack himself was cheating on a fiance. It was a good twist, but I was kind of surprised at how well she handled it. You would think that since she's just experienced being the one who was cheated on, then she wouldn't feel great taking part in a hook up that meant she was helping someone else cheat. I mean, although he's unhappy with the other girl, cheating on her isn't fair...

But anyways, it was a great short story and I look forward to reading the sequel. I'll be heading on over there right now

Okay so I seriously loved this story and I would be begging you to turn this into a full out story because it could have a wicked story line. But I loved it. So much. And this is coming from a lurker of all your stories. Please continue, you're a fabulous writer and this has the potential to be an amazing story! (already is) :D

Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!

Holy snot this was effing amazing. And i agree with everyone that said you could totally turn this into a full story and we would be incredibly happy!!

Okay, I think that yes, you need to make this a full story. I'd love to see how this all turns out. :) Keep writing!

Yup you should make this a full story

Please make this into a story I'm really interested in the plot itself sooo can u message me or post it on Beast to announce tht u made Miserable at Best into a story please and thank you :)

I like it already!
Keep up the good work!

Yes make a full on story it's was reall really good

This would be a fantastic story. Please write more!!!

Make it story! it would be cool to see how her and mitchell and Zacky and his fiancé drama ^_^

Yes! Make it a full length story! Amazing!

I would love for this to be a full length story!! Loved it all!

Please make this a full story. I love the one shot!

loved this and damn that was hot. Would love to see this made into a story :-)

Yeah that was some awesome smut!! Im going to su scribe just incase you write more to this. i loved it ;-)

After reading that, this would be an AMAZING story!!! I loved it!

Well that was just sassay. ;D

And I think you could most definitely make this a story. But preferable after I finish catching up on Beast. LOL.

This was adorbs and sexay as your smut usually is. And Zacky. Omg. Nuff said.
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