I love the layout, I love the image, I love the idea behind the story so far, I'm definitely subscribing and I'm definitely recommending this story! I hope you update real soon! I wanna read more! :D P.S I can't really see many errors.
I love the layout, I love the image, I love the idea behind the story so far, I'm definitely subscribing and I'm definitely recommending this story! I hope you update real soon! I wanna read more! :D
As I read this, it really started to grow on me. I'm not usually drawn to these types of stories -- but this is an exception. I like the way you describe things, especially Lynx's dress in the second chapter. And I love the idea of this, so I'm definitely excited to see what happens in future chapters :D
PS: The layout is great too. It really helps the mood of the story.