Oh my goodness, this was unsettling in all the right ways. O_o I love the amount of backstory and how it all led up to the climax to tie back to the beginning, and I love how you developed Elsie’s character by describing her relationship with others – after all, the plot has to do with her interactions with other people, and the fact that she gets amnesia after everything makes it even more intense. I’d love to see you continue this someday, but this definitely stands alone as a great horror story! :)
February 1st, 2015 at 05:53am