We Can Leave This World - Comments

Well I was not expecting THAT. Wow. That was excellent!! I wish it didn't have to end!

So fucking sad. I mean I'm not crying or anything, but I'm damn close to almost doing it. Rev was a good laugh, all the guys were a laugh. The ending was perfect, sad, but perfect.

The story was amazing(: Great job!

Omfg *__* I usually don't like these kind of stories.....i guess you could say im really picky with storiesxD
but THIS one was just....I'm speechless
You had me hooked in the first chapter with Jimmy being funny and all and Zacky, Johnny, and Matt being all perverts with Jinx:P and Brian and Jinx hating each other and in the end falling in love;D
The story was really good I could picture the whole scenario
When you mentioned the story had a twist I had thought of something else-_____-
I literally teared up in the last chapter:3
I didn't think you'd actually kill Jinx and Brian:'( it broke my heart knowing Jimmy, Zacky, and Johnny were all shattered in loosing their friends and especially when Jinx told Jimmy to take care of Amelia and when she told her daughter that she and Brian both loved her:'(
Overall this is an AMAZING story:DD
maybe their should be a sequel where Amelia also becomes a hitman and other stuff happenxD....jk

holy shit! i was on edge every second of that last chapter!
I was in tears too :(
Great story!!!

sooooooo good :D

Moreeeeee ;)

Its a great story(: The only problem is that you should probably move the deathbat somewhere to the side so that you can read the writing(: but overall its really good.