Running From Insanity - Comments

Kaeru (100)

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It's blunt and gave me the shivers. Your writing style is awesome, one of my favorites to read. I'm curious to what else happens!!!!!!

May 9th, 2012 at 02:17am

cupcakesandchacolate (100)

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i totally like this story.
just revise your work i found some mistakes.
other than that, its AWESOME!

January 19th, 2012 at 03:22am

why_me (100)

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me like-lol-you should definitely keep writing(:

January 9th, 2012 at 09:51pm

babiiiigurllllxo (100)

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i lovee thiss story!

December 18th, 2011 at 10:28pm

Haikeru (100)

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Hello;
I've read your story; as I said I would do.
It gave my goose bums, it's really amazing..
it also sounds very real, and like.. I've got a friend who went through stuff like this and like..
It sounds like her life..
Amazingly written!

I like that you write from diffrent perspectives, and that the further I read the more I understand.. like; first something happens which isn't very clear, but later it's explained..
Well done!

What I don't really like is that there are sometimes huge time gaps, which make the story shorter then it could be, but I hope you will continue this story sometime! :)

x

December 18th, 2011 at 12:19pm