I think you got your three comments! the scene was needed. Believe that's soft compared to some stuff I've read in the past. I really hope you update soon! The story is pretty good far, I hope you update again. I really want to know how the two wake up. And the sex in his jersey......Hot! Very hot!
Oh my gosh!! I was so hoping someone would write a david toews story!! Please update soon! And make the chapters longe! This is going to be good! You've gotten me excited.