Wolf Tracks - Comments

can I just say the moment I clicked on the link, I was hooked by the layout? It's simple colors, but dramatic...

I really love your dramatic tone and details of the carnage and gore you portrayed. I think my favorite line was And the snow would melt beneath ruby ashes. oooohhh....epic. XD

Like my favorite line, I really like how the colors had the dramatic meaning in this story. Well, you only used the color ruby and black once each, but that just goes to show that each had impacted.

Your writing has a poetic flow to it that has a strange influence over their readers...almost hypnotic. Despite the dark theme, I found myself lost in the flow of your eloquent writing.

You have completely won me over. =D

I really like the banner since the background was white, the banner let the reader have a bit of a pre-view. Your description is wonderful and I don't really get much from short chapters, or prefaces I suppose, but this was very mysterious. I think you have a different writing style just like kirill said, and it's very nice to read.

I really like the layout. It's clean and very appealing, especially the banner

The first chapter is great. I love your style of writing, it's very unique. The way you worded the first chapter, starting each sentence with "and" was cool. I don't know what it was about it, but it just added some sort of poetic touch to it. It flowed very naturally while still creating a mysterious vibe.

I like how it was on the shorter side too. It gave away just enough to make the reader want more. I'm definitely subscribing :)

I'm liking this story already. The first chapter was brilliant.
Looking forward to more.

goodness gracious, you have the most amazing writing! what an intriguing first chapter, more like a prologue of course, but it was amazing. you detailed it perfectly, everything that i look for in a story. you are a gifted writer. keep it up!