So I just stumbled across this and read what you have of it, and absolutely love it! It's so greatly written, ugh, even though Kristin and Alex's relationship is very confusing and conflicting, when they confessed their love for each other, I just got all kinds of feels. <3 Although I'm annoyed that they're still not together with where you left off. And then there's all that Matt drama added on top of it. Ughhhh... There's only one thing I found slightly confusing about this story, and that was their ages. At the beginning, you have the characters two years apart in age, yet when they go to school, they have classes together and it's seemingly like they're the same age throughout it all. That was the only question I had. And then on the character page, you have them like five years apart, which got even more confusing... that may be something to clarify if you ever come back to this. But that's my main critique for this; everything else has gone smoothly and I've just loved this story. I really hope you consider coming back to this one day and finish it. Even though it's been three years, I have faith you could do so. I think this story deserves an ending, just to see how everything finally concludes between Kristin and Alex. If you ever choose to continue it, I will definitely be here to read. But if you don't, I understand. I just wanted to leave a comment letting you know that I enjoyed reading your story and think you're an amazing writer. I hope you're at least still writing on your own time, if anything. But yeah, even though it's been a few years, people like me are still stumbling across this and hoping for more. <3 It's sooo good and I'm glad to see that other readers (just going by the recs on this story) feel the same.
There's only one thing I found slightly confusing about this story, and that was their ages. At the beginning, you have the characters two years apart in age, yet when they go to school, they have classes together and it's seemingly like they're the same age throughout it all. That was the only question I had. And then on the character page, you have them like five years apart, which got even more confusing... that may be something to clarify if you ever come back to this. But that's my main critique for this; everything else has gone smoothly and I've just loved this story.
I really hope you consider coming back to this one day and finish it. Even though it's been three years, I have faith you could do so. I think this story deserves an ending, just to see how everything finally concludes between Kristin and Alex.
If you ever choose to continue it, I will definitely be here to read. But if you don't, I understand. I just wanted to leave a comment letting you know that I enjoyed reading your story and think you're an amazing writer. I hope you're at least still writing on your own time, if anything.
But yeah, even though it's been a few years, people like me are still stumbling across this and hoping for more. <3 It's sooo good and I'm glad to see that other readers (just going by the recs on this story) feel the same.