Luminous - Comments

Straight away, I knew I was going to love this. The banner is amazing, the summary made me "awww" and the fact that you used Phantom of the Opera lyrics just makes me love you more hahaha.

That's exactly what I do whenever I have a row with the other half, watch soppy movies, cry and eat chocolate, I don't care if that's cheesy or soppy it makes me feel better XD

Because I can smell your sadness from here, it's making my womb hurt."

Awwwwwww! That's the most romantic thing ever! Alsndudveidbfodb! I'm about to lose an internal organ it's so sweet and cute and perfect and sigh. Why can't anyone do that for me? XD I'm crying big, sappy tears of joy, he's just so romantic and perfect, where can I get me one of these?

And now they're kissing in the rain, my god, I don't think this could be anymore perfect! The proposal, his promise to love her and only her, *dreamy sigh*

....I spoke to soon obviously cause mad passionate sex on the front lawn in the pouring rain is HAWT! totally making me swoon so hard I nearly fell off my chair, oh my Johnny Christ, he's so sexy and manly an unff

he just didn't know how brightly he shone compared to all the rest.

I'm crying all over again, perfect perfect story! *bookmarks*

@ BeenDownThatRoad
Not at all, I was laughing when I was writing it Thanks for reading & commenting!

Awww....lol. I love the cheese...sneaky Brian. Made her think he forgot...Is it bad that I was laughing through the sappy movie stuff with her crying while stuffing chocolates in her mouth? lol...this was pretty cute:) thanks!

not crap, tis sap!

“I already have my very own star,”
And she really did, he just didn’t know exactly how brightly he shone compared to all the rest.

that was THE best line ever. i nearly started crying. amazingly written. great job

i actually thoroughly enjoyed this (:

This was like so cute and adorable. Even though it could be listed under cliches and cheesy stuff, it's still really amazing. I loved it just because it was so damn adorable.

CAN I JUST? Sorry this is so late again ahh.

IT'S SO CUTE I DONT EVEN. It's adorable :3 awww brian is so adorable in this. Especially how it was raining, and everything. It's making me smile like an idiot right now. Aw, aw aw aw.

This is not crap it was amazing!

That is so not crap! I loved it! It's so cute and you had me hooked from the beginning with Phantom of the Opera lyrics. :D Love love love!

OMG that was like the best one shot ever! Make another!!! :D My husband better buy me a star lol

It's so cute...like an overly fluffy bunny.

Aww this was really romantic and cute. I love how Brian came out in the rain to her window and ask her to marry him :)
Then hot sex in the rain..what more could a girl ask :D
Great story

This was so beautiful and had me aww'ing like crazy! :D

awh this was so romantic! who wouldn't want brian to come to their window asking to marry you and then eating you in the rain and then having mind blowing sex. hot damn ;D
haha i see what you did there, i thank you xD
this was amazing. so cute and romantic!

Aw, this was cute. ^.^ I don't know if that's what you want to hear or not, but that's what it is. XD It's actually a great job, even better when you consider you were struggling on it for so long. I liked it! :D

Love this! Keep going! :)