Really well done! I feel like she was a worthy Orig. character. She felt like someone I'd want to be friends with. That's really awesome given the length. Great job!
February 10th, 2012 at 01:33am
This is easily one of the best written one shot's I've ever read.
I don't even like the Red Wings but I found myself drawn to your characters and enjoying everything about this story.
I loved your description and how you weaved your way through their relationship they had to show who they were apart and together. It was amazing.
Great job!