Invisible Woman Blues - Comments

I can't wait to see more chapters from this story and Henry Rollins rules.

The summary seems really interesting and seems it'll turn out quite. It is a bit long, but it's kind of the good long.

Not a big fan of small banners and big story areas, but somehow you made that look lovely too. Good luck!

Ah. The layout is readable. I always really appreciate that in a story. Ah. Really long summary, but it was the sort that didnt drag on, but, instead, sucks the reader in and makes them want the read the story. I don't know who Henry is, but, from his character profile, he sort of scares me. o.o Lol, but I'm a wuss. You seem to have a very concrete idea, though I'm not much for love triangles. And it seems very unique. Good luck on this. <3