Love love love love! I have read a lot of Marauders stories but this is definitely my favourite! I really hope you continue, I also love how you write from the boys POV and the relationship between James and Lily is brilliant and so believable.
Oh, cute! I like the sequel a lot better than the first. Less bickering, for one. James and Lily are a little like Ron and Hermione, only more pretty. I like Veronica, but I hope Natalina isn't going to ruin anyone's life. Hm...yes. And do make a notice if the story won't be continuing anytime soon.
damn... I was behind on this one.. still awesome.. other than that, no I haven't seen the avengers. is it really as good as I've heard?? hmm.. other than that, I think mcgonnagal has perfect timing, Veronica is a sweet heart and that I can't wait to read even more of this ^.^
I literally stayed up all night reading the prequel to this. More. I must have more. This story is like my new addiction on this site. And I can't wait to see what unfolds between Remus and Veronica. I hope that random Mary chick from the train doesn't try anything. Same for that girl that showed interest in Sirius. >_<
If I were Lily, I'd definitely be creeped out by James knowing what I eat at the Start of Term feast. And I have to agree with SparkUpTonight. The last few chapters are fillerish, though I can see where you've begun to set things up for later chapters. I don't know how far you've planned it out, but personally, I'd love to see exactly how they ended up joining the Order. Also, I really do love this story. The Marauders are some of my favourite characters.
I love everything about this story, I just don't like how the chapters in this story seems more like fillers than anything else, it is the seventh year and you'd think you would hear more about the war and the Mauraders taking a stand, you would think it would be more noticed when James' dad died and everything.
I don't want to seem like I'm being so critical of your story, because I hate to seem b!tchy about such a great piece of work, but I think constructive criticism and a few wonders are good for authors and I hope you feel the same as well because I LOVE it when I get constructive criticism and am asked questions pertaining to the story directly, I feel it helps an author grow so I hope that maybe my comment will help the story grow haha.
Anyways, just so you know, I LOVE THIS STORY TO DEATH! Sirius Black/OC stories are always one of my favorites to read, anyways, I hope you update soon :-)
I love this story; it's really hard to put my thoughts into words, haha. Anyways, I hop you update soon. (Oh, and about your question, in one of the chapters, I wouldn't mind a sex scene.)