I really enjoyed that. First off, the banner across the top is perfection. That photo is absolutely amazing; did you take that? Secondly, I had no idea what you were going to do with those lyrics from the summary, and I'm glad I read this through. It was creative, despite being very vague. You touch base on all five of the senses without overwhelming the reader with details, which made my hair stand on end. Imagination is always that much better :) I was expecting it to be a little darker, but I'm really happy with how it turned out and how you tied everything together. Good job!
January 5th, 2012 at 07:55am
