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  • emily.cobwebs

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    haha thanks Riss :P love you x
    December 22nd, 2011 at 09:19am
  • sxirs

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    I really like this newest chapter! I don't really have much negative to say about it. You've achieved a good balance of action, description and dialogue. Annabelle's character is developing at a nice rate and you've left enough ambiguity for me to want to read more, but not so much as for me to be disengaged. Well done, can't wait for the next instalment haha :D xx
    December 22nd, 2011 at 09:07am
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    thank you :D x
    December 17th, 2011 at 11:24pm
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    the first chapter is really good. keep writing!
    December 17th, 2011 at 02:41pm
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