Cries of a Love Bat - Comments

  • marley strummer

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    This is super good!

    Still a better love story than twilight. XD
    February 21st, 2012 at 11:44pm
  • HarryPotta

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    This is one of the best stories that I've read! Keep up the good work! :)
    February 21st, 2012 at 07:05pm
  • shortygirl

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    Noooo Emily can't die!!!!! Niether can Pete!!!! brendon needs to chill he's freaking me out
    February 21st, 2012 at 04:59pm
  • WishingOnFireflies

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    I really need to reread all of this, because like 'shortygirl', I'm getting kind of confused. That, and well... I just like reading this story. Keep it up!
    February 21st, 2012 at 04:54pm
  • shortygirl

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    I love the new layout.
    But who were the rules for and why are there rules?
    I feel like i keep getting more connfused every chapter

    Oh and loved the update. Pete shouldn't go around scaring people like that
    February 20th, 2012 at 04:38am
  • EmilyWednesday

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    I like it. Couldn't stop reading it. Keep it up please!!!
    February 19th, 2012 at 02:08am
  • shortygirl

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    Kidnapped? I have to admit im slightly confused with the last two chapters....
    I have to admit its good to them being together again
    February 11th, 2012 at 06:08am
  • shortygirl

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    Wtf is going on with Pete? I really don't like William right now. He's bossing Pete around
    January 30th, 2012 at 01:00am
  • bb-8

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    Okie dokie, I'm totally digging this :P
    Looking forward to reading the chapters to come :D
    January 29th, 2012 at 09:46pm
  • shortygirl

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    Yay so Gabe action

    How can she just sit there with William knowing he took Pete?

    I wanna see Pete sweep her off her feet
    January 21st, 2012 at 01:19am
  • shortygirl

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    Poor Petey there torturing him....
    Em needs osmeone to hold on to when she's alone and scared...though those nightmares woud scare the shit out ,me
    January 17th, 2012 at 05:03am
  • shortygirl

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    Okay im so not trusting Brendon or Ryan anymore...and what was up with Pete? Pulling her into the alley..that wasn't smart Pete...
    January 16th, 2012 at 04:36am
  • toesofthetickledkind

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    I love sixteen candle verse, there's so many things you can do with it!
    January 12th, 2012 at 05:44am
  • shortygirl

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    Patrick without a hat never...though it kinda weird to see him with out one with the whole solo career

    I can only imagine what Pete has planned up his sleeve...I prefer Brendon
    January 12th, 2012 at 12:48am
  • dayXdreamXbeliever

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    So good!
    January 3rd, 2012 at 09:12am
  • shortygirl

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    I love it and thank goodness i thought Pete lost it something...

    Pete and Emily Yes
    Bredon and Ryan yes
    January 2nd, 2012 at 06:00am
  • secrets-that-die

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    awwee
    January 2nd, 2012 at 05:49am
  • WhatTomorrowsFriday

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    Definitely explained a lot! It was a cute chapter too in addition to be very informational. I think the Brendon and Ryan thing is gunna be cute too. I just love those two. Good or evil I'll take them either way. The next chapter cannot come quick enough!
    January 2nd, 2012 at 05:49am
  • shortygirl

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    Trust me i dont have much of a social life either....i love update

    Patrick seems like he got poisined or something..
    January 2nd, 2012 at 03:51am
  • WhatTomorrowsFriday

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    You are on a roll, girly =)
    January 2nd, 2012 at 03:21am