Cries of a Love Bat - Comments

Travie!!!!! I think Gabe and dirty were in that video...man this brings back some many memories from FOB concerts....i didn't expect Ryan. Pete has some explaining to do...

WHAT THE FUCK?!?! Okay, not expecting that. But Ryan looks good in eyeliner too. Alright, so I'm a little confused. Are the Dandies and the Hunters in cahoots? Maybe it's just this chapter that made my head spin, but what a twist. Loved it though! Pete had better not hurt Patrick though, I just love him too much to let the vampire in lady pants hurt him...even if Pete can pull off lady pants....damn he's attractive...

Oh god...what did they get themselves into know....

Im really excited to see more of these fanfics popping
back up. Im realky excited for an update and curious ad to
Where everything is headed. :)

I'm just going to say that even though Pete is 30+ he still pulls off eye-liner. Okay, so Pete is in jail but WHERE THE HELL is everyone else?! It is going to be a serious blow to Pete's ego when Emily walks in and posts his bail. I'm excited for it, lately I'm all about seeing Pete's ego crushed...hmm. Yeah, but I'm curious as to the events leading up to lighting a warehouse on fire. I think the guys should let Emily come out on hunts with them or she should at least see what it's like. I can just imagine something like, "Do I need to babysit you guys where ever you go? When you're out alone you set warehouses on fire!" Anyway =) I hope to see more of the guys in the upcoming chapters!

So she wanted to die because she was scared of loosing the others? correct me if im wrong
lmafo...R rated dream...i love it....
There not moving to quick but i don't think they should go to the whole fucking thing yet
I feel like im rambleing on now

The first part of that made me laugh out loud, Pete would so have sex dreams...oh, men. And when she said, "guess what, that would suck." I liked that part too =) The whole Bill taking over her mind cleared some stuff up for me, so that was good and interesting too I never would have thought of something like that.

I don't think their moving too fast because they're connected now, but I'm wondering if they're connected and all lovey-dovey than which one of them is feeling that way? Or does the connection just make them having feelings for each other like that? You know what I'm saying? I was so excited to see a second update. I'm right in the middle of writing the next chapter for TOH now and I was losing steam, but now I feel rejuvenated enough to continue writing! Keep up the great work!

Emotionally, physically, and every thing in between? LIKE SEXUALLY?!?!?! I'm seriously excited for this! I want more, more, more! So what happened to Bill after he bit her? Did the hunters totally kick his ass? Does she want to be with Will more than the hunters? I can't wait for the next chapter.

Emotionally, physically, and every thing in between? LIKE SEXUALLY?!?!?! I'm seriously excited for this! I want more, more, more! So what happened to Bill after he bit her? Did the hunters totally kick his ass? Does she want to be with Will more than the hunters? I can't wait for the next chapter.

I love this so far
Though im confused as to way she wants to die.....

Hmm... This is definitely intriguing. I'm confused as to why she wants to die, but then again... It sounds like she's pretty clueless also. I also wonder how she knows Brendon and Ryan, and if William is going to turn her, or just let her suffer. My guess is that he's going to turn her, but she's not going to become a Dandie. She'll end up being like Pete, but maybe making a deal with the Dandies or something? Or maybe get too close to one of the Dandies and end up screwing herself and her friends over? Just some scenarios that I thought of... Please Update :)

Okay, I'm so sorry that I just got on to read this because I was missing out! I'd been so busy for the holidays that I had completely deserted my Mibba and in turn, this awesome story! I'm excited for more and glad that you found inspiration in my story because this is awesome =)

i love it :]] can't wait for the next part!

love it already (: