What the actual fuck? Is he high and drunk all at once? Cause in my books that's fucked up right there. Cause you do write a letter saying one thing and do that fucking shit. It will just make the other person pissed off.
Hurry up on love will find a way, I love your writing style it flows so keep that up. Then unlike a lot of story's i haven't really found any grammar issues, so keep that up to.