Consequences - Comments

I like your story so far. It flows nicely and I enjoyed the relationship between Gerard and Annaliese (which is a cool name, PS). Your layout is really nice as well, it compliments the story. You're doing a great job, keep it up :)

@ lizzicleromance

Ha, thanks! And I swear we go way back btw.

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First off, the layout is gorgeous! Second... wow. What a summary and first chapter!! This seems to be shaping up to be a very interesting story, please keep writing!! If you get stuck or need any help feel free to message me, I know how frustrating writer's block can be and all it takes is another mind to help make that go away! :)

Great job so far!