Best Thing I Never Had - Comments

It's currently one in the morning, and I got recommended to read this via Comment Swap..

This was a very powerful and heart wrenching story and I can't believe I let myself finish it during the knife scene. That seriously made me cringe, but in the best way possible!

Truly amazing read! Great job!!

This was really good. This was really powerful and deep. I really like your writing style. The layout was perfect, it fit the story really well. You really made me feel something so congrats that's not an easy feat. All around this was really well done.

This was really good. This was really powerful and deep. I really like your writing style. The layout was perfect, it fit the story really well. You really made me feel something so congrats that's not an easy feat. All around this was really well done.

this story is so powerfully deep. it made me sad at the end because real events happen to people like this everyday. good writing. this was amazing

The summary, layout, and writing are all perfect! I love where this is going. I'm not much of a wives and girlfriend's fan, although I do love Avenged Sevenfold, so the part Gina plays isn't my favorite but I'm definitely into the story. I'm glad that it's long enough to really get you into it all. I'm excited to see where you're going to take this story! :)

I didn't expect this to...uhm...get to me like it did. In a good way, you did a great job on this. I like that you were able to make this so long, because a lot of stories on here, (including mine, I'm still working on the art of stretching a story) are fairly short. This made me a little uncomfortable, though I'm glad I read it through to the end. I liked how it ended, it shocked the living hell out of me, but I like it.

this is amazing.
id write more but i dont know what to say <333
This story definately struck a nerve with me.

Holy fucking shit, I am speechless.

So I somehow stumbled upon this story while I was finishing my lunch at school. I read it throughout the majority of my science class until someone nudged my shoulder and said I was making faces at my textbook. I actually had my phone tucked in underneath the cover so everyone thought I was squirming and looking pissed off over the topic of entropy.

I've never read something that actually made me react and feel angry or uncomfortable. Your writing flows so easily from one word, one sentence, one paragraph to the next that I could imagine something like this being read in a magazine or short stories novel: it was that good, especially when it came to details. You don't overuse them or make it too bland to read. There is just the perfect amount to make things count, and it's beautiful. I also liked that you didn't dwell on one section of her life for too long. All of the time lapses were believable and inserted at the right times that it felt like, I don't know, a perfectly strung pearl necklace. I don't know what else to compare it to. I've always admired authors who can write one-shots like these that have many events crafted together in a couple thousand words to form . . . a pearl necklace. Nothing else I can say. As I've stated before, I'm speechless.

I'm so happy I took the time to read this, even if I know close to nothing about entropy now. :---) It was worth it.

PS. Oh my, you can only imagine the faces I was making at the end. The knife scene had me cringing so much that my friend asked if I needed the bathroom.

I don't really get why this doesn't have several pages of comments, because I know I sure loved this. I love how you didn't give this a happy ending, because not everyone gets one. God, Brian is such an asshole in this. I hate him. in this. hehehoho c:

Great Job again Stef!! Loved it do much:))) oh and btw COMMENT VIRGINITY!!!! ;D