All Mine - Comments

... I don't know what to do. The guy mystery was supposed to instil doubt not a lousy conversation. No offense to the conversation. I love it when they talk to each other... That one just lead to crap

These two need to fix their relationship ASAP.....

I hope things get better for you. I really enjoy this story and alot of people do too. I hope you update soon. :-)

This story is amazing well not the unknown guy he's one crazy mother fucker

i like this hope you update soon :)

I think that u should put in a filer. Like a date or something. It'll give u time to stall. Sorry about ur tummy ache n I am not the biggest fan of new mibba either

Seriously read the whole thing within a day....Very interesting...great structure and detail...Good use of pathos....I bet Ry is the stalker....Logical conclusion...Update soon please..

I just read all of this at once and this is amazing. And I care you don't feel good. :( I hope you feel better soon and the writers block goes away too. This is amazing. Like I said before. Update soon, love. <3

I care :( Hope your tummy feels better. Iddk about unknown. I was curious to see where that went, but if you never actually had a plan for that person w/e.

Omg I love this story! Please

suddistic i like it :P

I bet I was right.
Cause being wrong is for other people.
Anyway I luv the story n the scary guys has become my Muse. Update soon

is it ryan?

Mrs. Hathaway is awesome!
I really want to find out who this mystery person is!
:)

awwwwwww please update

I'm not sure what I'm more excited about, creepy guy or more adorable nicknames

Loved chapter 12. Only thing I would say is that you don't need the *Start of Flashback" and End of Flashback bits. It flows nicely enough into the start of the flashback and then a simple * after the end of the flashback would be perfect :) I love Caine's mum xD

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

update or i will cry.....Derry has his daddy back :'D

ah omigosh! I like it a lot! Der-Bear thats so cute! aha i cant wait to read more!~