Winter's Tears - Comments

This story was very interesting, at first I wasn't sure what was going on, but then I got it as I read on. Very well written. Nice Job! :D

This is very well written and has a very interesting/exciting plot. The only critique I can give you is to make sure you have all your verbs in the same tense, because with some of the sentences the verb tense makes it awkward to read. Other than that, this is a beautiful story so far and I can't wait to see where it goes.