Always and Forever On - Comments

  • BUSTANUT

    BUSTANUT (100)

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    Jesus Christ, excuse me while I fucking cry. Oh god. I'm an emotional wreck right now. I honestly didn't expect this at all. I'm still in complete shock over this.

    So first, when I read the story I wasn't listening to the song. My own interpretation of the song was completely different from what you wrote. To be honest I was a bit confused on how the song went with this story, because for some reason I always figured the song was about a break up, you know? The tone of the song and beat isn't all sad but a bit upbeat and angsty. but fuck man, you seriously opened my eyes!

    You fucking made the song more than what I ever would have thought and for that I thank you. Not trying to be gay and cheesy, but the song fit perfectly with the song! God, I'm in in complete awe. I read the story already three times and each time I get more stoked on it and the more I cry hahaha. Not just bummed tears, because I could relate to the words Dan wrote to his father, but because of the beauty of it all. Of the words you wrote. God man, you're killing me!

    Every line from the song fits perfectly with the story, PERFECTLY
    I'm trying to put lyrics but I might as well copy and paste the whole song.

    'Nobody plans to be half a world away at times like these,
    so I sat alone and waited out the night.
    The best part of what has happened was the part I must have missed.
    So I'm asking you to shine it on and stick around.
    I'm not writing my goodbyes.'

    Perfect, I'm fucking telling you!

    Thank you so much for entering, you know how much I adore your writing.
    December 23rd, 2011 at 09:14am