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  • stephie_babie_9898

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    Again simpy amazing, and btw the character you made after me is exactly like me, were both lil sex monkeys!! Ahhh cant wait to see what happens.
    Loove it doll
    January 7th, 2012 at 05:37pm
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    Her mum is mean! I don't like her. >:(
    January 7th, 2012 at 01:51pm
  • AmberSkye

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    Well that's a fairly neat roomie to have if you were stuck in a shithole like that at least! I can totally see Gabe and Jett breaking in and making a huge scene to rescue them. With like, paintball guns or something lol! Can't wait for the next chapter!
    January 7th, 2012 at 09:33am
  • We'llBraveThisStorm

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    oh my god. i love this. her mom is evil. cant wait for the next update
    January 7th, 2012 at 06:35am
  • bealiveplaydead

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    oh my
    how much more shit can she get into?
    lol
    January 7th, 2012 at 06:17am
  • sarahm598

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    I hate Cora's mother oh my god Jett needs to get her back!
    January 6th, 2012 at 03:21am
  • CatchingDreams

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    Oh my god no!!! Poor Cora!! :O and here I was thinking that it was about time for the mother to turn up again... But I so didn't imagine this! What a bitch! :O
    January 6th, 2012 at 12:41am
  • two sided heart

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    i love this chapter poor cora, i hope jett can save her update soon if you can
    January 5th, 2012 at 09:48pm
  • MrsSnowLover

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    Wow,
    Love the story
    Update soon!!!! :D
    January 5th, 2012 at 06:13pm
  • feedmetothewolves;

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    woah no no no no that was nuts! how is jett gonna get her back
    January 5th, 2012 at 10:11am
  • AmberSkye

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    Oh. My. Goodness. I was worried that the plot was going to get dull, but scratch that! I'm super excited for the next update!
    January 5th, 2012 at 06:16am
  • We'llBraveThisStorm

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    oh my god. sadness. update soon, pleease
    January 5th, 2012 at 04:56am
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    YAAAY 10 stars!! :D this makes me excited!
    January 4th, 2012 at 10:27pm
  • itsjackz

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    Aww that was sad
    Update soon please!
    January 4th, 2012 at 09:25pm
  • AmberSkye

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    I feel so bad for what happened! Great chapter as usual. :)
    January 4th, 2012 at 06:20pm
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    it reminds me a lot of '10 things i hate about you'. i don't know if that was your intention but it's very close to those character dynamics.
    you need to seriously work on your grammar - namely, 'to' and 'too'. it spoils your story. the way you open with 'Cora's POV' is quite needless unless you've changed the perspective previously, which you haven't. ending with 'and that was when Cora...' is really not interesting. the 'and' makes it sound worse than it is but still, the phrases could be the subtitles of the chapters or something.
    January 4th, 2012 at 06:14pm
  • stephie_babie_9898

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    I am in love with your story i swear too amazing!!
    January 4th, 2012 at 04:05pm
  • you're_addicted

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    =D brilliant as always
    January 4th, 2012 at 02:13am
  • CatchingDreams

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    Awww I feel kinda bad for Gabe, but the cheerleaders in my heart are screaming for Jett :D I just love it! Please update soon!
    January 4th, 2012 at 12:40am
  • AmberSkye

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    This. Is. Amazing! I read it all today and killed my free time :) You're a great writer, usually I'm not interested in these stories but yours has me hooked. Update soon?
    January 4th, 2012 at 12:32am
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