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  • emilypaget

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    I love Avenged Sevenfold. I love the title. I love A7X fan fiction. I do love the story, the plot line is great, though I have to admit I'm not a fan of BxB plots and this is no exception. There are a few errors that disturb the reading flow. It kinda feels somewhat choppy. You need to definitely look at the grammar of your story, there are many. Hopefully though, you get better, because in general, the idea is solid. Good luck!
    February 1st, 2014 at 04:07am
  • emilypaget

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    I love Avenged Sevenfold. I love the title. I love A7X fan fiction. I do love the story, the plot line is great, though I have to admit I'm not a fan of BxB plots and this is no exception. There are a few errors that disturb the reading flow. It kinda feels somewhat choppy. You need to definitely look at the grammar of your story, there are many. Hopefully though, you get better, because in general, the idea is solid. Good luck!
    February 1st, 2014 at 04:06am
  • Synful Cocktail

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    OH MY GOD! Update soon? Pleaaaaasee?!
    July 2nd, 2012 at 08:08am
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    I love both the movie and Avenged Sevenfold. And at first, I was really excited when I found out that this story has both.

    This story has a good idea. However, I notice you have a lot of punctuation errors and grammatical error. I'm not really picky about grammar but when there are just too much error, it kinda ruins my mood to read the whole story.
    June 8th, 2012 at 04:21pm
  • october-ninja

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    Why do i have this feeling that Jimmy going to say "the magician strikes again" at some point
    March 2nd, 2012 at 05:57am
  • LyttleSynyster

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    Update this seriously
    January 18th, 2012 at 06:47pm
  • Scar Vengeance

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    update!!!!!!!! :D
    December 29th, 2011 at 08:47pm
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    Nice update :) Can't wait to read more
    December 27th, 2011 at 04:38am
  • megan20089

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    Love it. :)
    December 26th, 2011 at 08:52pm
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    Love it!
    more soon?
    December 26th, 2011 at 04:03am
  • megan20089

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    Love it. :)
    December 25th, 2011 at 02:38pm
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    I like it so far :)
    December 22nd, 2011 at 09:05pm
  • Scar Vengeance

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    yey first comment... i like a lot :D
    December 22nd, 2011 at 04:44pm
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