Crime To My Heart - Comments

  • PurpleLighter1

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    Gr8 story! Keep it up!
    December 25th, 2011 at 03:52pm
  • Irbisfreak

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    I think it's better now :))) Thanks :)))
    December 23rd, 2011 at 11:21am
  • Irbisfreak

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    Why didn't anyone noticed Frank being kidnapped? And there is no struggling from Frank, I mean it sounds almost like he was "I'm being kidnapped, okay, I'll help that kidnapper and won't even scream" so, here tips I suppose, besides I liked it and I wonder who it was to kidnap him and phone him. Intriguing... :)))
    December 22nd, 2011 at 08:19pm
  • Irbisfreak

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    I don't get it yet, but I'll stick with it to see how it continues :))) I kinda like that murderer, they kill popular ppl :D
    December 22nd, 2011 at 06:41pm
  • PurpleLighter1

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    This is really good! Nice action and mystery, and it's a frerard, so of course I'd read it :D
    December 22nd, 2011 at 04:59pm