Crime To My Heart - Comments

Gr8 story! Keep it up!

I think it's better now :))) Thanks :)))

Why didn't anyone noticed Frank being kidnapped? And there is no struggling from Frank, I mean it sounds almost like he was "I'm being kidnapped, okay, I'll help that kidnapper and won't even scream" so, here tips I suppose, besides I liked it and I wonder who it was to kidnap him and phone him. Intriguing... :)))

I don't get it yet, but I'll stick with it to see how it continues :))) I kinda like that murderer, they kill popular ppl :D

This is really good! Nice action and mystery, and it's a frerard, so of course I'd read it :D