Wow this is really good!x x x
February 15th, 2013 at 05:49pm
The Awakening - Comments
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This is pretty good so far happy i stumbled upon this story. Can't wait to read what happens next. (:January 4th, 2012 at 11:31pm
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I like this a lot. It's very interesting. There are a couple typos such as "peace" when it should be "piece" and when someone speaks, it should start a new paragraph. Maybe try and make a layout as well so it doesn't make your story seem plain
Aside that AMAZING JOB!December 31st, 2011 at 09:05pm -
And no what it is will be kinda shown later on:)December 26th, 2011 at 12:31am
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It is a latin term translate itDecember 26th, 2011 at 12:14am
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very good though personally i don't get the whole Lorum ipsum thing. . . . is it a technologically advanced place?December 25th, 2011 at 04:55am
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Thanks for taking the time too read it and comment:} and i think your poems are awesome you should definately write moreDecember 24th, 2011 at 03:25pm
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sorry for those typos in my other comment!December 24th, 2011 at 05:43am
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I absolutely love this! It is very good. I love the whole plot. Your grammar, spelling,and usage of words is very good. You' be surprised at how maany people dont have good grammar and spelling skills! And I'm in the seventh grade. (Im 13) Oh. by the way, thanks for reading my poems. I love yours too!December 24th, 2011 at 05:40am
