They'll never know. - Comments

I got a little freaked out when the thing said "My.. aren't you pretty?". It got really curious when the face appear in the picture, and then the rest got better. I like your writing, keep it up. I give a thumbs up. :D

Wow I honestly though it was going to be a normal winter day by herself but no. It just happened to be quite the opposite and my eyes were glued to the story the entire time. This was really good. :D

It really is a shame that there aren't more readers on this and comments. I really did not expect this. It totally caught me off guard. Your a really good writer for one and how this played out with the strange man, appearing from underneath the bed was great. It felt so real, reading this. It gave me chills. The idea of this really freaks you out, being out there in the cold, alone in a cabin and a man is trying to harm you. That's nuts! And I loved it. You did a great job.

I was not expecting that to be a horror story of sorts. I freaked out when she saw the hand in the picture. Not a lot of stories that are meant to freak people out, actually freak me out, but this did the job. Great details!
Here are two things that should be revised, just minor typos:

"I suddenly very extremely exposed."

"I head the... the thing scramble out from under the bed."