Outlaw Eyes - Comments

Some sexy pool time fun...loved the update

vampire sex drive sure is high! lol loved how she finally gave in...! :D Please update soon, this story is just beast! :P

I never seen so many horny teens in my life...j/k high school was full o them

Lots of wild sex :o
and the link isnt working in that last chapter ://
just thought i'd let you know!

Hellz yeahhhhhh!!!!!!!

Very sexy... (;
loved the update

sex scene! fuck yes!

i love it!!!! loved the part about cc and ashley :) cant wait for the next one....i'm glad things are better for you

OHMYGOD I Love It!!!!!!
keep going!!! XD

i been lookin forward to that :)

Im not surprised his mother heard...kinda funny

Ahhhh My Internets Been Off Way To Long
Can't Wait For The Next One xxx

haha, they were heard ;D

once again great update :) i hope things are ok with you and youmre feeling better

woo hoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was amazing girl..nice job ;-) cant wait for the next one

I really love this story, the whole plot idea and everything. It's very interesting and isn't like any other vampire story I've ever read. I loved how you made Lyrical a hybrid. I thought that was awesome. I also loved your name choice for her. Lyrical Flower. I found that interesting.

On another note, I would like to give you some constructive criticism. I am in no way trying to be mean or insult you or your work. I have noticed that there are many grammatical and spelling errors. You may want to go back and fix them. :) I hope that you take this is as criticism and not me bashing your work, because I'm not. I love this story.

Nice sex scene...thought i find it funny that he forgot about her being a virgin

woman boner during the chapter:)

eek i love it!!!!!

Jake works fast. wink wink. Lol.
An' I love Oli so much:)